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DevanshiKhetarpal

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Going Insane, or Not

    This was okay. I'd say that the poem was too short for my fancy. I think two or three more stanzas should do. I agree with Catcha01 that it should ...

    May 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: War of all against all

    This was good, though. I believe that you could still do with a bit of improvement. Perhaps, you could've used some more poetic devices to improve your poem. Moreover, a ...

    May 11, 2013


That's just what translation is, I think. That's all speaking is. Listening to the other and trying to see past your own biases to glimpse what they're trying to say. Showing yourself to the world, and hoping someone else understands.
— Ramy (Babel by R. F. Kuang)