DestielAndGamTav

Oh my gosh, that was amazing! I loved it from beginning to end, everything about it was just great! I honestly wasn't expecting this much from a short story in ...

First off, this is a beautifully written piece. Your use of personification, metaphor, simile, and many other forms of literary effects was well-executed and appropriate, seldom seen anymore. You had ...

Hiya! Overall, I absolutely loved your essay. It tests the boundaries of one's mindset, and it certainly helped me see that the difference between right and wrong is certainly grey, ...

Here for a review! I really liked the plot, first off. A bit more world-building ingrained into the story would be fantastic! However, there were quite a few grammatical errors. ...