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Hello racket! Thank you very much for the in-depth review of my story. I agree with everything that you wrote, such as making the metaphor of the jewel a bit ...

Hi WrittenEdge! First of all, thank you for the positive comments. I'm glad that my first short story attempt wasn't too terrible! After reading your constructive criticism (which I really ...

Hey there @fantasydragon01 :) thank you for the comment! I agree about your suggestion for the sentence change, it would make the story a little clearer. I'm glad you enjoyed ...