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Demetri

  • Other » General, General Re: Carla

    It's not actually supposed to tell you more about the character. As it's a one-shot, it's supposed to tell you only what's there, but I suppose I need to concentrate ...

    Apr 6, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Carla

    Hello Snoink, This store is prose allegory, and I understand what you mean. I'll focus on the characterisation. Thank you or reviewing. (: Also, just out of curiosity, what 'style ...

    Apr 6, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Zenith

    I adore this. The imagery and the words you choose to describe it with are really original and interesting. I love how every part is a snapshot of something different ...

    Feb 28, 2010


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