DeltaAllon

I know I always miss stories and I mostly needed enough points, but I'll be honest. Sometimes it is general that a story has a little bit of grumpy mother. ...

To this day, I’m still not quite sure what happened that day. It should’ve just been a normal day for a normal teenager like me. I don’t think I have ...

I know it's hard to describe why and how Blaine (or is it Blaire? At the end) have interest in girls, but it seems bit of a rush without telling ...

This doesn't feel like a prologue, dude. I say it would be an acceptable chapter. Writing is incredible and dark, though I couldn't keep up most of the time to ...

Okay... I know I'm doing this just for earning points, but this does give a lot of questions. I'm too tired to read lot of other people's comments, so I ...

Sorry, I forgot to turn review switch on. Re-uploading.... I also have writing mistakes, but you're doing good enough. I mostly respect other people's writing styles. Maybe you could change ...