Deifyance

Awesome! I'm hooked, Waiting for the next few. :D Im not gunna review 'cause it looks like it has already been done. All I can say is keep going, don't ...

I agree with CeUpOnAtIm3Xo, it moves a bit fast for my liking, and you might want to disperse the detail on MAtt a little instead of putting it all in ...

Awesome! and I liked the description of the money, everyone thinks specifing the amount of money is a waste. Well I don't I think it brings the peice even more ...

Well, i don't know what all the others are thinking. (no offence intended) I personally liked the extra detail, it gave it character. I imagined it as in a movie, ...

[s]strikethrough = take out[/s] Underline = Put in/Replace I thought it was charming. I like the journal format of it. The only thing i would liek to see more of ...

I loved it, reminded me sorely of Lord of the Rings. I believe canislupis got most of the reviewing, so i'll leave him to the claim. I only had a ...

Ok, I thought this was exelent compared to the other one. I only have one or two problems. 1. You mentioned the color of the craft Ryan was flying, but ...

Well, I don't know what Dream, and all of the others who critizized (sp) you were thinking. I thought it was exelent. It reminded me instantly of Twilight. Did the ...

Just a little helpful hint, not a big bad review. MORE DETAIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok, now that thats off my chest. Way more detail woud be nice. I can't imagine any part ...

very, very, very nice. loved it :) hehe. saw no errors (...) I see a struggling novel coming from this (...I wonder how ) good luck, make sure that you ...