DefianceDagger

Thanks for everything! I will definitely try to work on some of the things you said! I think your username is pretty cool to :)

Thank you for your advice!

Thanks!

Thank you for your advice! And I guess this was something of a fantasy poem. I was just having fun when i wrote it :)

Thanks and as for the mistake%u2014no worries!

Lol actually it wasn%u2019t suposed to be a metaphor but I suppose it could be! I will post more and fix my grammar mistake soon! Have a wonderful day!

This is a very interesting idea and a promising start to a uniquely fun fanfic, so first I would first go into what is great! Capria Tonks: It's awesome that ...