DeerInBacPac

From start to finish your poem captivated me. It keep me interest because it was talking about a person who, every morning, wakes up and sees only the flaws in ...

Just from glancing at this it has great potential but the capitalization is horrid. My eyes are practically bleeding! A few places are in the dire requirement of the need ...

I absolutely love this! The flow is great, no bumpy words or confusing sayings. Your descriptions are excellent and add much to the poem. It makes it seem even more ...

There are a bunch of kids in my school that are like this! For some even getting an -A isn't good enough! I am not like this in any of ...

I really liked this! I have plenty of questions about the character, and what exactly happened to their sibling. Were they murdered? Did they kill themselves? Did they just up ...

I like how you worded this, the way you parted the sentences and added the sound to give it more... more desperation and it grabbed my attention! I could easily ...

Okay, this is deep. But I like it-if that makes sense! The writing falls easily together, like a book that you know by heart. If I am correct every new ...

The wording was excellent and the way you changed the font highlighted the words meanings even more, adding a sense of strength. It's easy to see from your writing that ...

I quite like this world that you've built. There seems to be a lot to it, from the characters to the setting. Plenty of potential. But the setting, that's what ...

THIS. I relate to some of this and I know its hard. I feel like some words should of been emphasized though like the first somewhere and the my at ...