DeepCrystal

The way you say that most guys in high school don't want to fall in love that they just want to have a girlfriend...sounds like most guys just want to ...

I see what you're saying about Kieran. Maybe I am just trying to hard to make him a complex character, because he is. He reacts differently to different situations, which ...

I get what you're saying about the beginning. I am still brainstorming other ways to begin this on the original documents. (Also I don't always remember to update the one ...

Haha. You are not the first person to so kindly request that I do not throw in any romantic feelings between my MC and his best friend.

My pleasure ;)

Could you tell me where it seemed scattered?

Anberlin is Christian/alternative rock. 30 Seconds to Mars is alternative rock. And Simple Plan is alt/punk rock. I don't listen to them as bands, I just like those songs I ...

I like your reference to Five Finger Death Punch. Good band. Although, I think the songs I was listening to when I wrote this were Feel Good Drag by Anberlin, ...

Will do

Thank you for the comments!! I don't normally post lyrics.

I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. And I'm not saying you have to, but I published the sixth chapter a little over a week ago and it is still ...

I appreciate that, but I am a little iffy about sharing this whole story.

Grazie per i commenti, Kevin25a. I am not Italian. I just do a lot of research. My main character is not Italian. I will eventually explain their friendship depth. Also ...

Thank you for the comments. If you do get a chance to the previous chapters, I hope you enjoy.

We have that in common. LOL Though I am a notoriously slow writer. I will write for three hours straight and sometimes a week will pass before I pick it ...