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  • Novel / Chapter » General, Narrative Re: The Sonnet of Lochlan Doyle - [1]

    Did you mean this as a reply for my review or as a review to this story?

    Oct 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Ten

    Sexist how?

    Sep 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Nine

    It's Italian

    Sep 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Eight

    Thank you for the review. I will tell you that there are a couple more recent chapters of this that have NO reviews.

    Sep 20, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Friday

    I saw the depression in it. I know that not everything is literal. And I do hope that life gets better for you.

    Sep 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Seven

    I am sorry about your family. I have a friend who was raped as well and the company of her friends (myself included) really helped her power through her trauma. ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Seven

    Thank you for your comments and I please don't think that I would take your criticisms personally. You seem better at constructive criticism than some. There are some who are ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. One

    Not necessarily if you have the patience for tons of research and self-taught language skills.

    Aug 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. One

    I am not Italian. No Italian ancestry that I am aware of. I just thought that I could stray away from French, Spanish, and even Chinese.

    Aug 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: There is No Freedom In Isolation

    It's okay that you don't watch movies. Omega Man and I am Legend are two movies (actually both based off of books) about a man who thinks that he is ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Eight

    I thought that it would be better for the reader if it were implied through his dialogue and actions rather than simply stating it.

    Jul 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Eight

    I'm sorry that my find my MC confusing. I am well aware that there are readers like you who don't understand his inexplicable behaviors. Look up Asperger's syndrome.

    Jul 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Six

    He's an artist. I meant for him to sound a little too flowery at times.

    Jul 16, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Awaken

    You're okay. I just thought it was silly.

    Jul 14, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Awaken

    You posted the same comment nine times? LOL

    Jul 14, 2015


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