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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Painful Death

    i hate you too

    Mar 27, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Painful Death

    i hate you Comma after 'ache'. The final three lines (starting with 'life was never good for her') does not flow as well as the begining. Also, what's with the ...

    Mar 27, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Recycled Sand

    Next time, try posting something that makes some sense, if you can. - Firestarter

    Mar 27, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Come Out

    just becuz you don't like the style of the writing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was an overall good intention but...the ending made it sort of tacky. Ofour has already mentioned your spelling ...

    Mar 27, 2007


I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities.
— Dr. Seuss