DeathAngelRuby

i hate you too

i hate you Comma after 'ache'. The final three lines (starting with 'life was never good for her') does not flow as well as the begining. Also, what's with the ...

Next time, try posting something that makes some sense, if you can. - Firestarter

just becuz you don't like the style of the writing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was an overall good intention but...the ending made it sort of tacky. Ofour has already mentioned your spelling ...