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Woot! First review. :lol: Okay, here goes. Over All I liked it a lot, but the repeating stanza in the middle threw me off the first time that I read ...

That was truly, well, awesome. I noticed it was long, but i didn't really think anything of it because I guess my attention span is a bit longer than that ...

Hola. I liked it. I don't know about some other people around here, but I think it's funny. Like Mimi, my favorite was the cricket. I must seem like a ...

Wow. I really enjoyed this poem; I love the way you used the phrasing and organized you're lines. It's pretty. :wink: Nitpicks e.g. compliments & grammar bleached petals like paper; ...

Hey Trikky. I enjoyed reading this, even with the lack of length, it's really well written and I like your style. I clicked on this just because of the title, ...