Deanie

Thanks so much for the ahmazing review! It's super helpful. I am someone who isn't a fan of uncoordinated planning too - but I did want hitch-hiking and some impromptu ...

Thanks for reading Ayush!

Are you just randomly looking back on year old works? Ew a year old review.

I am a bit rusty. I am making my rubbish first draft and then I will have a lot of points to refine and focus on in the rewriting stage. ...

Thanks Pretzel! I will work on getting to those nitpicks. I haven't really planned out her leaving at all and the journey in detail, so I should be getting to ...

Okay, I am going to work on making those points more highlighted. I think they were brushed over way too much.

Read through this again O.o did I write something weird? (Never read through them again, it's cringe worthy xD)

Thanks for the review! And as for a future note, for the quoting it is: [quote][/quote] ;)

Thanks for the review Noelle! ;) A lot of good points here, and I am going to work on that last line a lot because it definitely is not the ...

Thank you

Whoa, that was beautiful

You already make me want to keep on posting this and keep me writing. Honestly, this review

I know what you mean! Thanks for reading and reviewing Blue.

Thanks Pretzel! You actually have a lot of true points here, especially about her being sick. I am going to work on it a lot :)