Deanie

Thanks for the review sister

Just trying to get your chapters out there sooner. In fact, I think you have enough now to post again. I will work on it...

No problem! There is always time for editing later ;)

Thanks for the review Blue! Totally understood as to why I need a reason, and I will try squeezing in more description there =)

Thanks Yubbies

Thanks for the review Iggy! Yes, I have totally re-edited the previous chapter because it wasn't one of my best and I messed up :P Will take all your points ...

The thing about a space at the beginning and end, I am not sure about it. I think that is more stylistic choice. But I do know that at the ...

I can't even review D: This is just too perfect and too good. I am going to read the final chapter and see if I can be any use there ...

I will add in that comma! Also, the reason is because the portal always gives them a different obstacle or task to face, which means Mrs. Claus might never of ...

Thanks for the review sis! I should try and get rid of the just's... they just pop up xD I know, they don't really contribute much...

Thanks for all the awesome reviews today Reise! I will work at that character development and fix those nitpicks.

xD Thanks for the awesome review Timmy! You need to notify me when YOU post something!

xD That review ending :P I cannot prove your wrong, your reviews are too awesome! Will mention cliffhanger in there in future edits ;) Thanks for this!

Thanks for the review!

Hair is wonderful okai Everyone needs more 'u's in their lives :P