Deanie

These chapters are too perfect. I would like them, but I did that before so... All I can say is, this better be published when you're done ;)

Are they here—have they breached the wall—can they get into the park?” All these dashes in a chapter! They can get a bit too repetitive though, and I felt a ...

Agh, I'm not sure about the ringmasters being female... It just felt RIGHT to have guys. And well, I dunno really >.> I guess other readers can't miss what they ...

Okay, I guess you can tell I don't own a pet :P

Eh I could do that. I need to change the whole priest word then xD My mistake

fed and watered the cat I never knew you could water a cat O.o Do you mean gave water to the cat? “Don’t stand there staring at it, close the ...

Oh wow, I do believe we hadn't heard of Christian's father being in the novel before the editing? It makes him living alone seem a lot sadder, especially when he ...

Ooh I like this change. I wasn't too much a fan of the big bit of description at the beginning, but I like being able to see the local's opinion ...

I cannot review this. It is pretty short, but then pretty great as well. I can't believe Asteria blurted it out like that? D: I also can't believe what happened! ...

Thanks for the review! All these nitpicks O.o I guess you can tell I did not read this through >.> As for me calling it service and all, it's because ...

It's so good! I can't believe I didn't see it before ;)

That cover tho D:

Oh I just came to mention that I did read this before. It was just too fab to review

Thank you

Ah make sure you mention what is being wiped out from what isn't :P