Deanie

This one IS much better than the last one :D And I think your writing is getting tons better! Every work has room for improvement :D

Hi Rissymay! Maybe I should make an authors note or something, but the run on sentences are all purposeful. I am trying to copy a style in another book, called ...

Wonderful, as always. :)

This is very, very helpful! I was hoping that the repetition wasn't going to get too boring xD Will add in another line there! This is by no means a ...

I like it Aria ^.^ I would review it too, but I have all but forgotten how to review poetry xD

Hey Blue! Brilliant chapter, as always. It was this reunion when I missed the ringmasters being male, but then again female suits them more throughout the rest of the story. ...

Thanks for the review! I will think about it. This was half written while babysitting. I was given four random words to make a story from which included heart, so ...

Hey Pompy! Whoa, that was an amazing read. It was wonderful, fantastic and I am left loving every single word you wrote. Really. I am not just trying to inflate ...

Well, I think I have just found a perfect poem.

Thanks for the review Noelle

I'm glad you like it. And maybe I will move it down a few chapters when I edit for her to call Ben her best friend.

^^ Thanks Blue! You're right about the Holland/Netherlands comment as well :D

Thanks so much for the really helpful review! I didn't even mention how the mother cant really help with the transport because of money, but she does put some in ...

Thank you for the review Magenta! I am a little bit bad when it comes to commas, but with reviews like these I'll learn :3 Go for that star!

Geology... is it fun? Emotions, got it. I think this is the perfect chapter to insert them in the places you mentioned, so I will.