Deanie

xD Oh dear, I think someone knows my tendency to edit as I write. I WILL TRY to finish draft first ;D

I know you don't like it xD Thanks for the review, it was mucho helpful. I am sad to know you had to redo a lot of it though :(

Thanks Blue! I know this story needs a lot of work, and hopefully there will be heavy edits soon. I will try and slow it down.

Thanks for another review Noelle! You really are catching up quickly ^^ I am going to work on strengthening her relationship between her and her friends!

Ugh, how did you find this? I said nothing that NEEDS reviewing, because this is so bad and I wanted to hide it ^.^ But thanks for the review anyways

Thanks for the review Noelle! I will make sure to make these changes :3

Novels can have more than one adoptive parent though, so it's all good ;)

Aw it's no problem!

I will try to! Very useful review and I will try to connect up the dots more of why she suddenly wants her hair done and how it factors in ...

Thanks for the review Noelle

Thanks so much for the feedback, Snoink! I will definitely work on doing so. Yes, this doesn't flow very well to my own ears either.

Thanks for double checking. I will try and make it clearer in the next chapter.

Hi Skins, You may not have written in a while but I sure as ever have nothing more to add that people haven't said before. Reading this chapter has made ...

Oh dear, what an old review...

Well, for foster kids they kind of live in an orphanage type facility until they actually meet foster parents willing to take them in as their own?