Deanie

This isn't a proper review? Of course it is! And yes, gotta proofread next time xD Those commas >.> I have worked on them, revised them and they always escape ...

Thank you :) I look forward to reading more of this ^^

I love it

This really did! And don't worry about reviewing late or anything - I'm always thankful whenever you have time or not. Thanks so much

Thanks for the review, Timmy! I am honestly going to have to do something about those commas >.>

Thanks for the review Blue! Heehee you shall have to wait and see... Not a couple of months now, though. Since Samantha's collapse I think I know what I want, ...

I honestly have no idea of how to review lyrics... but loved this!

Thanks for the review Timmy! I had no idea you could write fantasy like this. Someone has been holding out on me. I didn't know this either xD But it ...

Thank you for the review, Flite! It seems like I have a lot more work to do on this.

Thanks Pretzel! I did mean for Sky and Janessa to appear as friends, but maybe that needs a bit more work.

Thanks so much for reviewing! I know what I should keep doing now. I think Tom does need some more explanation, so I will get to that!

I hope that goes well ^^ I'll be getting to the other chapters soon.

I know. Too many ideas and I just can't seem to write EWS. I think it's because I am too happy and that is a sad story. So yes. All ...

Thanks so much, Flite

Yes! This is only part one of the first chapter, but hopefully I can edit to make this chapter better. And I will let you know when I post more.