Deanie

Hey there Tiana, Congratulations on writing a very intriguing essay! I wasn't sure what to expect when I read this because it's always difficult to pin down what makes a ...

Hey there Sarah! So I saw this and thought, yay, more of the story has been posted! But this is the sequel. Because it's the start of a whole new ...

Hi there Megsug, Me reading some more again. Thanks for letting me know you posted it. You have brilliant description, I love reading this so much. I'm interested to see ...

Hey there! So, I have to say I love the style in which you write. It draws the reader in on it's own, which is great! At first I felt ...

Yeah, me again! So, another great chapter! I love how towards the end we don't know much about the men, but they're telling us something about Vinnie and Linwood. Whoever ...

Hi Paracosm, Deanie here to try and give you a review. I find it a bit harder to review stuff that's already so good, so excuse me there. I really ...

Hi there Ajruby! Here to do a review on this novel chapter. I just read the other chapters as well, so I could understand the story and know what's going ...

Hey Writingangel, I'm afraid this might be a very short review from me. DarkRaven has pretty much covered most of what I wanted to say as well. Let's see what ...

Hi there Storygirl, I am going to be completely honest and let you know I didn't read this completely! As SlushySlapped already mentioned, it's way too long! You should post ...

Hey Semoyia! Deanie here to give you a review! I'm just going to let you know that I read all the previous chapters so I would know what's going on, ...

Hey Cyahazard, I've read your story and I'm here to talk about it. There wasn't anything terrible about this piece of writing, which is great! There are a couple things ...

Hey Wild! Deanie's [finally] here, so let's get right down to it. Thanks for letting me know it was up :) First of all, I would like to congratulate you ...

Hey Shady, Quick question that has nothing to do with review: Why the name change? A good progression in the story as it continues. I found the confession of love ...

Hey Shadyyy! I finally made it to the banquet :D I just can't get enough of your characters and how you make them so realistic! It shows so much, as ...

Heya! Doing the last part! So, again I don't find any technical difficulties. Hmm, good! But the same point I mentioned earlier is still kind of happening :/ Yes, Kadi ...