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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Clouds

    This is very sad, its very deep. What I would try though is to say what you want, but not say it. like the line so she cut herself, think ...

    Sep 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: when

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    This piece is really good i like it a lot.

    Sep 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: when

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    This piece is really good i like it a lot.

    Sep 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: when

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    This piece is really good i like it a lot.

    Sep 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: when

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    This piece is really good i like it a lot.

    Sep 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: when

    This piece is really good i like it a lot.

    Sep 15, 2016


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price