DeadEndsAreOptional

I really like it so far. I like how you made it without a lot of description, it makes it more mysterious and made me want to read more. Since ...

I love how the beginning starts, it made me want to read more. It's a great story so far! You wrote it very well. The only thing that you might ...

I love it so far! That was a very a good idea to start with him in trial, but it was a little rushed in the trial. Otherwise, the story ...

Question: She opened her eyes and stared face to face with German. Was she dreaming or hallucinating that German was dead? Other then that it's an interesting story so far, ...

It's a very good start in a story, it's described very well (I like that). I like how you said' her red eyes roamed the valley, glistening like rubies set ...

I like how you worded this poem, very mysterious and interesting. I especially like the part ( My hand is a mystery, you see, Something I never understood very clearly. ...

I don't really have anything to say bad about the story. I love how you wrote it in the perspective of the soldier and how the soldier felt about seeing ...

I like the main character so far, she seems like an interesting character. The ending makes me wonder what happened that the girl would never see her mother again, it's ...

Very good story!:) I like it, it kind of reminds me of Alice in Wonderland when Alice woke up at the end of the book. (That's a good thing). It's ...