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Beautiful. :) I really liked this part: My past is dead And my ghost follows me You have a natural gift of writing. I can't wait to read more of ...

Hello and Welcome to YWS, LoudAndProud! I like what you have so far and I think it will become a very good book if you finish it. When I started ...

The 1st idea is an interesting one, and I think that would be a great story. The 2nd one could be more of a horror kind of thing or a ...

I really like the idea of your story and this first part that you shared is really good. I especially like this part You can feel the punching rhythm of ...

Hey, Megsug! This was an awesome chapter. He was here. That sentence got me to sit up in my chair and read it with a different kind of urgency. Which ...

This was awesome! I really like the setup and plot of this story so far. Really loved the ending "Come to us, Masquerader". Love that. :) I really hope you ...

Aww, love it! I really enjoy reading your short stories, your really good at it. I was not expecting the ending, that was a surprise but it made me like ...

Hello, snickerdooly! I really enjoy reading poetry, and reading your poem made me enjoy it even more. The verses rolled off my tongue with ease, and I've read it twice ...

I really enjoyed this. It was very interesting. But the one thing that did confuse me was the person narrating. In the prologue it was Luna, but in this chapter ...

Oh, I like! This prologue is really interesting and really...cool. :) I agree with the other reviewers, this story has potential. If you ever finish this book, please tell me. ...

Oh, I really enjoyed this! :) The only thing I would like to say about this is that it got me confused. Peter woke up, ate breakfast and then all ...

I love this book so far!! It's amazing, like TigerShaard said. The plot is very interesting, I haven't read/heard about books that are taken place in Auschwitz. It's a very ...

You're great at writing these intense scenes! Is this suppose to be a different version of your story 'Remembering Yesterday'? Because it has the same kind of plot and the ...

Great beginning! The way you described the attack was great, it reminds of short clips of building collapses or attacks. You made it realistic, though the fireman most likely in ...

First of all, it's a great plot but if she had a head injury I would imagine that she would be less aware of her surroundings. If she went through ...