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Dawnbreaker

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The Shifters-Chapter 1

    But it was clear. She reached her pale arm just says that her arm is pale! Seriously!

    Jun 15, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The Shifters-Chapter 1

    No offence but what normal person would assume a person had loads of arms just because they had written a short pale arm.

    Jun 12, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: The last start prologue re-edited

    This is what it was meant to be but it didn't update last time! It mucked up what this was supposed to be. Thanks for reviewing! :D

    Jun 1, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: The last start prologue re-edited

    Thankyou! :D

    May 25, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: The last start edited prologue

    Thanks! It was just an idea I am working on! Thanks for commenting on it! :D

    May 23, 2012


If I seem to wander, if I seem to stray, remember that true stories seldom take the straightest way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind