Davethepenquin

Very nice essay - It is for Geography I expect for the Human elements of Geography, like economical stuff (LEDC, MEDC, all that) and social stuff. The reason it is ...

Hello! This is very good. (I'm awful at reviews) Logan seems like an awesome character, in that his being kind-of depressed and wallowing in self pity/disdain is something not often ...

Pretty flipping good my friend! I'm bad at writing reviews, so sorry about the following paragraph of nonsense. Its very pacey (if that's a word) and the use of a ...

Many naive people think that haikus are easy to write, but having a syllable restraint makes it harder to convey imagery that with other kinds of poems. However, AwesomeSocks, your ...

I must agree with Sandvich on everything he said. Maybe the phone working on a diferent planet could be an extension of one of the charecters powers. Colin can "control" ...

"Ill Be Back!" To read the rest! Dead Space – Security One Josef screamed and struggled, but to no avail. The man, no, creature on top of him slashed at ...

Glad to see you're keeping this novel up! Colin woke from the nightmare with perspiration dripping down every inch of his body. The dream had caused a restless sleep even ...

I noticed something. Colin was angry now. He balled his hands into fists. People were watching now. Colin Flash was about to have his face smashed in, and they were ...

Very well written BadlyDrawLightning! “This is a joke right?” said Colin, exasperated. “What do you mean open a wormhole? I’m going mad, aren’t I? This is all some crazy hallucination!” ...

I like this. I love the way your description of the lizard-guy doesn't give too much away, but is alluring and creates a clear and present antagonist. As Sandvich noted, ...

I can see how this was inspired by Touching The Void, Terraria, and Rango. I've never been stranded in such a location before, but the train of thought depicted here ...

I really enjoy this poem. The language was very strong and well used, and I found the metaphors incredibly written. The only negative would be several small grammatical mistakes, mostly ...