DarthTedious44

Love all yout guys support. I hopefully will be uploading the next part by the end of the week depending on how my job at finding stories I like then ...

Thank youbfor the very detailed (not to mention my first ever) review. I love the support the first three reviews gave me (it also makes me stressed to write better). ...

Thank youbfor the very detailed (not to mention my first ever) review. I love the support the first three reviews gave me (it also makes me stressed to write better). ...

Thanks for the review! I noticed adidn`t write the arrow and door scene the best so here`s what happened. He saw the arrow coming and slammed the door, then it ...

Thanks for the review. Especially your opinion on Jason. I agree and I feel I need to deepen his personality. Also glad you liked Conrad and sad to say his ...

I quietenjoyed this story, the gripping begining caught me on (As well as the simillarity between mine and your stories name lol) I agree with the other reviews of info-dumpy ...