Darkthorn

Thanks so much for catching that though. Much appreciated. Will tag you in the next update

Hi Phoephernelia, I updated the above. I hope it came out better?

Hey, I updated the above, and took into account what you'd said. I hope this is a bit better than before?

Daemon here to leave a review. Really, really, really can't find anything wrong with this, at all. No, seriously, this is amazing.

Hi Phoephernelia, let me start by saying thank you. I really enjoyed writing the prologue scene. I might actually add some descriptions for the cathedral. But I initially didn't want ...

Hi EPICnumber1. Thanks for the review. I totally understand what you mean when you say that even though the lines look to be different lengths, they play out the same ...

Hi Spaulds, switched the closing line to its own stanza. Any thoughts?

Thanx Spaulds. I wrote this roughly four or five years ago. So there are bound to be some errors. I will take into account the effect given off by the ...

We, as humans, tend to under appreciate ourselves. Its only natural. If you have time take a look at some of my work. Would love feedback from you.

Hi gecko. I could have sworn I reduced it to just one cuss-word. But thanks for the review.

I can completely understand. I too, tend to just write without thinking. But that's because writing is my way out, my way of leaving my problems in the real world ...

Hi Rocketdog. Thanks for the review, I have managed to edit it a bit, so if you feel up for it, please have another read through. Also, have you read ...

Thank you ET95. I understand what you mean. Sometimes I tend to lose track of what I'm writing, but I understand exactly what you mean. Please read my previous installment, ...

Hi Legend46. Thank you for the review. Yes they are speaking French. I tend to play with different language. so if it is distracting please let me know.

Thank you for the review, Wind. I understand why you feel that way. Admittedly I had a very difficult time writing it. But, I intentionally did it this way as ...