DarknecrosisX

Right, now as much work as you put into this (which I respect) there were a lot of errors within this, and as a reviewer I have to be to ...

Wow, this is amazing. Such a descriptive piece, setting a perfect scene for a story. I liked the way how you added detail to the central characters life. I tried ...

I liked this, a wonderful first person piece. The description was great, but a lot was about the air. Maybe you coud have described a few more things. This is ...

Hi Peep! This was a nice piece, full of description and explanation. Time to do a bit of critiquing :) (even if they are a few nitpicks) What you could ...

Welcome to YWS! I do believe I am your reviewer this fine evening, as long as nobody steals my 50% bonus! Anyway, onto the review. 1. I do believe this ...

Wow, I like your style, especially the mail in the quote format. Anyway, onto the critiquing!!! Most of it was covered by Manisha but I picked out a few mini ...

A quick review for a quick poem! I found this interesting, and quite creative. It flowed well and I definately felt the feeling of being absorbed by a dream. And ...

Wow, I was expecting great writing, and I was not dissappointed! This is absoulutely amazing! Now, being me, prepare to be critiqued! 1. I did notice you used a lot ...

Wow, this is pretty dark, just how I like it! I liked you used of rhyming couplets but managed to keep it dark and eerie at the same time. Quite ...

I like this. Poetry with high contrasts do. So what i liked: 1. The antonym that the poetry is based around. The calm, sweet blue sky, becoming a harsh, aggresive ...

Wow, nice use of repetition. Very interesting. I liked how you used plenty of personification, and the the repetition of how 'you dont want to fall in love' and how ...

Very well done, a nice piece of introductive, descriptive writing. I could definitely learn from the amazing dialougue in this! XD Anyway time for a couple of nitpicks... 1. Dialougue. ...

Well done! very good. Me, being picky, has a few critical points about this though... 1. You had so many paragraphs, I feel sorry for that abused enter key! Some ...

Hey alec its meeeee! Anyway, the review... Ok, be prepared for a lot of critiscism: Its good. thats about it, no offense but it could do with some work. 1. ...

A good start for a character profile, with a great variation description words. If this is going to be a part of a sci-fi story, then I think Wyatt would ...