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Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 2
Wow. This is so good! :D I didn't want it to end. Just being picky, I seriously hope the thinks I’m just clumsy. Is the 'the' meant to be they? ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 1
I really enjoyed reading this! :) With the speech though, you don't always have to use adverbs. Like I explain calmly Most of the time just the 'I explain' is ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: Disenchanted
This is great. :) I really like the detail of the description, but sometimes there is a bit too much. Maybe only describe in detail some of it, rather then ...
Nov 13, 2011