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Re: First Date
This was a nice idea for a story. It was implemented well, and entertained the reader. That said, here are the nitpicks: I’ll tell you what happened. No, you say ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Once Upon A Time
GRAMMAR AND SPECIFICS shouting "Oh NO!" yet at the same time shouting "Oh YES!" because "NO" and "YES" should not be capitalized, this is odd formatting and doesn't look professional. ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re:
GRAMMAR AND SPECIFICS I Breathed in shallow quick breaths "Breathed" should be "breathed" I could already see the next weeks headlines "weeks" should have an apostrophe between the 'k' and ...
Mar 12, 2011