Daring

Since I have played basketball I understand your terms. I have a slight connection with this poem and it could be stronger. I think if you added some details or ...

I really like this poem!! Some parts I felt I connected easily with and others I didn't get. But that's probably because I haven't experienced that. I liked how it ...

The story itself was great! There were details but there could be more here and there just to add some flavor. You could explain how the little girl looked like. ...