DaniSlovinski

I like that you have a very detailed writing style. As this is a prologue, it's good that you are explaining what is happening, but not ruining the plot-point. The ...

Thank you for your support. Sometimes when people write about my flaws in the writing style, I feel discouraged, but then I know that they're just trying to help me ...

Cool. I get inspiration from Harry Potter and Percy Jackson. They're pretty much the only series I've read through and actually liked.

About the introvert thing, she's me. She likes to stay inside, but likes a little company. I also don't want to explain how Rukia and Jean became friends (in five ...

Thank you. Also, about the introvert thing, it's that Jean is supposed supposed to be something that is like me. Cool, funny (at times), and friendly. She's a friendly introvert. ...