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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Heavenly

    What a beautiful piece! I can tell that you thought quite a bit about your stanzas, so well done. I have a few little problems. The second to last stanza ...

    Feb 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Hawk

    A very nice piece of writing, although I did pick up on a few grammatical errors. You switched from present to past, but keeping present tense consistant in a story, ...

    Feb 3, 2013


“Can a magician kill a man by magic?” Lord Wellington asked Strange. Strange frowned. He seemed to dislike the question. “I suppose a magician might,” he admitted, “but a gentleman never could.”
— Susanna Clarke, Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell