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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Wolves Are Out

    I very much like this poem, especially since it's about your walks in the evening. I can really relate to that scared feeling, where everything in the shadows is scary ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Angelic Catalogues of Celestial Despair

    I love your poems, Matt! They're really amazing. They reflect your thoughts a lot, and the only thing I might suggest is to take is easy on the AABB rhyming. ...

    Nov 20, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Could Be Stockholm Syndrome: Chapter One

    So. This is not a review, just some comments of mine. A little gushing, since it's late at night and I needed something entertaining to read. So I read this. ...

    Nov 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Blue Porcelain

    I for one, really enjoyed this poem. I like Asian things in general, and am always fascinated by how translations turn out. You know how sometimes the wording will make ...

    Nov 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Trio of Tribulations

    Morning/Mourning < love the title. very clever ^_^ As I swallow the morning, Oh, so bright. < although you may have meant it to be like this, I feel the ...

    Oct 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bruises

    I loved this! The speaker and the speaker's tone was very dark, and wonderfully so. The rhythm was smooth, and the words were nicely chosen. Although maybe you didn't intend ...

    Oct 29, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: How To Dump A Partner

    Haha, although I wouldn't mind a guy that can burp the alphabet, I did enjoy this piece. It was creative, light, and it made me smile ^_^ I can't think ...

    Oct 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Revenge is Sweet

    Hello there Demoness! I must admit, I am a bit scared O_O I don't like the idea of revenge, but as a poet, this poem was incredible. The flow was ...

    Oct 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Angel's Omen

    UWAH!! Your poems are awesome! I love how you rhyme, but sometimes ya might want to be careful of the flow and the words you use to rhyme. But you ...

    Oct 26, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A Beginner's Guide To Coming Out In High School

    Wow. Just wow. In a good way. I forgot someone in high school was writing this (which is sad, kind of, because it's written through a high schooler's perspective). You ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Our Moon

    This was sappy. But beautifully and purposely so :) Haha, I'm even younger than you, so I really can't say anything about love. I've tried the whole holding hands and ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Breaking of the Black Mare

    As Erza suggested, the first thing I thought when I looked at this was, "This should be broken up. It's a little overwhelming." But when I actually read it - ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: And We Sit.

    I really liked the idea of this poem. The words were a little plain, but the message was powerful. The ending was the best part, and if the whole poem ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Gayfriend. :3

    All those memories, whether it be walking on top of the 3m wall like foolish children or having the same colored ice pops, how can I ever forget. Should this ...

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The House of Light

    First of all, I find it interesting that your username is SparkOfDoubt. It makes me wonder if it has any meaning, and the question, "Doubt about what?" pops into my ...

    Sep 29, 2011


Turn your demons into art, your shadow into a friend, your fear into fuel, your failures into teachers, your weaknesses into reasons to keep fighting. Don’t waste your pain. Recycle your heart.
— Andréa Balt