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Re: The Wolves Are Out
I very much like this poem, especially since it's about your walks in the evening. I can really relate to that scared feeling, where everything in the shadows is scary ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: The Angelic Catalogues of Celestial Despair
I love your poems, Matt! They're really amazing. They reflect your thoughts a lot, and the only thing I might suggest is to take is easy on the AABB rhyming. ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Could Be Stockholm Syndrome: Chapter One
So. This is not a review, just some comments of mine. A little gushing, since it's late at night and I needed something entertaining to read. So I read this. ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Blue Porcelain
I for one, really enjoyed this poem. I like Asian things in general, and am always fascinated by how translations turn out. You know how sometimes the wording will make ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The Trio of Tribulations
Morning/Mourning < love the title. very clever ^_^ As I swallow the morning, Oh, so bright. < although you may have meant it to be like this, I feel the ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Bruises
I loved this! The speaker and the speaker's tone was very dark, and wonderfully so. The rhythm was smooth, and the words were nicely chosen. Although maybe you didn't intend ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: How To Dump A Partner
Haha, although I wouldn't mind a guy that can burp the alphabet, I did enjoy this piece. It was creative, light, and it made me smile ^_^ I can't think ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Revenge is Sweet
Hello there Demoness! I must admit, I am a bit scared O_O I don't like the idea of revenge, but as a poet, this poem was incredible. The flow was ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: An Angel's Omen
UWAH!! Your poems are awesome! I love how you rhyme, but sometimes ya might want to be careful of the flow and the words you use to rhyme. But you ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: A Beginner's Guide To Coming Out In High School
Wow. Just wow. In a good way. I forgot someone in high school was writing this (which is sad, kind of, because it's written through a high schooler's perspective). You ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Our Moon
This was sappy. But beautifully and purposely so :) Haha, I'm even younger than you, so I really can't say anything about love. I've tried the whole holding hands and ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: The Breaking of the Black Mare
As Erza suggested, the first thing I thought when I looked at this was, "This should be broken up. It's a little overwhelming." But when I actually read it - ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: And We Sit.
I really liked the idea of this poem. The words were a little plain, but the message was powerful. The ending was the best part, and if the whole poem ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Gayfriend. :3
All those memories, whether it be walking on top of the 3m wall like foolish children or having the same colored ice pops, how can I ever forget. Should this ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: The House of Light
First of all, I find it interesting that your username is SparkOfDoubt. It makes me wonder if it has any meaning, and the question, "Doubt about what?" pops into my ...
Sep 29, 2011
