DaggerChild89

Thanks so much for the review! I do see what you mean by the abruptness of the quote. It wasn't exactly written in order, but that could probably have been ...

Oh sure! It's supposed to be representing the inside-the-box situation humanity has trapped itself in. This is put to test (or blind experiment) by the camera, which proves the problem ...

Thank you!! I did write it haha. Just a question, what part didn't make sense to you? I struggle with clarification occasionally and I would really like to know so ...

Thank you so much!!! I'll be looking forward to it haha

Thanks for the review! Just a note, Genesis is female as well and Aspere, although she is a friend, wasn't supposed to be anything more than a background character. Sorry ...

Thanks for all the advice! I really appreciate it and will definitely be able to use it in the future, especially the parts about being too expository, as I tend ...