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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sweet Porridge - Unpublished

    Wow! Just wow! That's amazing, great use of humor, imagery, metaphors, and rhythm. The moral of the story is pretty good too. The story line I got to say is ...

    Feb 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: "Hello"- the beginning

    Nice work, it describes the power of a simple word we just randomly throw at people everyday without having second thoughts. I think this might be the first time or ...

    Feb 28, 2014


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings