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Re: Sweet Porridge - Unpublished
Wow! Just wow! That's amazing, great use of humor, imagery, metaphors, and rhythm. The moral of the story is pretty good too. The story line I got to say is ...
Feb 28, 2014 -
Re: "Hello"- the beginning
Nice work, it describes the power of a simple word we just randomly throw at people everyday without having second thoughts. I think this might be the first time or ...
Feb 28, 2014