DKChris

The poem is simple and that's what gives any poem its meaning. As a starter poem its great, and the emotion that the poem gives out is what you want ...

Hello there! First off, I like the concept of the story. There are tiny mistakes but it looks like they've been covered. The only thing I have to add is ...

Me again, hello there! Much like the last chapter, I very much enjoyed this. Both of them leave you wanting to read more, but it's gone. I like the way, ...

Well, at first glance of the title I didn't know what I was about to walk into at all. I have to say, it was quite enjoyable. I think it ...