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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: When the Blood Smears * Chapter 2

    I like this chapter, it’s short and to the point and full of suspense. And it answers my question on what happened to poor Skittles. I wouldn’t advise to change ...

    Aug 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: When the Blood Smears * Chapter 2

    i like this! im enjoying reading each chapter, but im also sort of confused about why the cat is buried in the back yard. I'm thinking the girl killed it, ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: When the Blood Smears

    this was confusing, but good. What does the teacher mean when she says this is not the mc first time in her class? Other than that i like it! continue! ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: When the Blood Smears

    First off, I would like to thank you for your time and effort on this review. It is greatly appreciated. One of your questions, "Why is she laughing about the ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Play. Pause. Rewind.

    Excellent! An intense opening is a great way to start. Your character development is intriguing and I was hooked from sentence one. I can see a few grammatical mistakes but ...

    Aug 2, 2010


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