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Oh and I just posted the rest of the story that I've written so far check it out if you like this! You can call me DJ if you like.

Thanks! I do switch tenses sometimes...sorry xP. But where do I do it in here? And about the info dump, I never planned on posting this until I found this ...

Ummm...It's okay I guess. Was it meant as a young person becoming old through time? Also, it didn't flow that nicely for me.

Wow, this is amazing. At first I thought it was going to be like marrige but when I got towards the end I got it. This is a very powerful ...

I don't know...I'm not really liking this story or the spelling. It kind of sounds like Sabrina the teenage witch.

WOW. I really love this poem. It's really dark and mystic. Great job.

Sorry for my third post in a row. I need to tell you that this would be the first real chapter. It's not that great but the next two I ...

tension The clock to my right was striking midnight. It was dark and I was alone with my dreamer. Before I decide to wake her up I need to know ...

Thank you guys so much! It's okay if critiques are harsh I want harsh! (there I go with !!!!). I have a few chapters written up, but I'll only post ...