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Yep, that's Dave for ya. As for Dr Paul... I didn't intend for that to happen, but I guess you could interpret it that way if you want. It's possible ...

Huh... Well... How Cookie died is a little out of context, yet at the same time it feels like it should have been made known somehow. For more info on ...

Thanks for the review, Deanie, even if it's at the expense of your free time! You've touched me! Anyway, you've had me frightened there. When you said 'everyone just keeps ...

Okay... so how did Carrie's brother meticulously carve Cookie Monster up in the cookie jar? Weird...

Wow nice there's a lot of things. While I don't agree with some of them, that's plenty of good you did for me there. You've noticed things that I suspect ...

Why thank you, kind bunny sir!

No, I completely understand. It's a constant danger - the reader losing interest. I've been wrestling with this problem, and it tires me out. I hope you'd read on and ...

Wow you're good, you're noticing things that even I won't notice when I'm meticulously searching through my third draft for errors or something. Nice! And again, I like how you're ...

Cool, it's nice that you're noticing the little details. I took great pains to embed them there. Thanks! :) I'm glad you're enjoying this stuff.

Well... I wouldn't use the word 'forced'. I believe it 'motivated' you to review, considering that there's no actual way the website could coerce you in any meaningful way to ...

Thanks man. While I do not agree with some things, I agree with most of the things you said. Especially the part about the adoption. Darn! I guess my hand ...

lol you sound like you're reviewing a poem :D But thanks for the review :) I'm glad you enjoyed it, though I seriously doubt I'm appealing that much to the ...

Darn, I'm really starting to slacken a bit as the novel progresses. I will fix that problem as soon as I get around to it, preferably after writing the next ...

Darn, I'm really starting to slacken a bit as the novel progresses. I will fix that problem as soon as I get around to it, preferably after writing the next ...

Oh okay. *Goes back to flogging himself and reciting the grammatical rules of the English Language* Yeah well, there's always room for improvement, but I get what you mean.