Cutechuckie

I like this! It's very cute and gives people encouragement to reach for dreams :) It's wonderful :) KEEP GOIN!

I liked the message in the first poem it was absolutely powerful and beautiful. I preferred the rhyming and flow of the second one. For some reason I really prefer ...

She could only felt a sword in a stone - She could only FEEL* a sword in a stone She kept cutting herself in pity like nothing else is worse ...

I like this, this is nicely written. I am also re-attempting poetry soon :D so I'm looking around for inspiration and This was very inspirational. GREAT JOB.

Wow that was a really good piece of writing. It showed a short glimpse of how the character felt about .. her MOTHER :O dun dun duuuun :o !!!!! haha ...