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Re: all of us are angels
I like this! It's very cute and gives people encouragement to reach for dreams :) It's wonderful :) KEEP GOIN!
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: new
I liked the message in the first poem it was absolutely powerful and beautiful. I preferred the rhyming and flow of the second one. For some reason I really prefer ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: The old and beautiful
She could only felt a sword in a stone - She could only FEEL* a sword in a stone She kept cutting herself in pity like nothing else is worse ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: you need to be free
I like this, this is nicely written. I am also re-attempting poetry soon :D so I'm looking around for inspiration and This was very inspirational. GREAT JOB.
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: I'll Ruin Her
Wow that was a really good piece of writing. It showed a short glimpse of how the character felt about .. her MOTHER :O dun dun duuuun :o !!!!! haha ...
Oct 20, 2008
