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Re: Hurtful smiles
Wow, I have one thing to say and that's that this is very expressive! It seems you'r point of this bit was to get a girls/boys feeling across, and you ...
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: Sign Language
Inscribing messages the gods shall never know, Your face lit by the candle of the moon. My favorite part! Ooohoohoo! I loved this! It gave me slight chills, I thought ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Uh, I wanted something to post, just to try it out
WOW. You are inspirational, reason. You wrote about a frikin penny and the story was AMAZING. Every little word was so detailed and had me cling onto visulization. " Lincoln’s ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: How I Saved James
I absolutley positivley LOVED THIS!!!! The details, the plt, omg, the plot! Where can I start? Curious quistions 1) How did James kill Miranda? The only thing that I got ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Last Night
I enjoyed reading this. My only problem is that you ryhmed "two" with "too", but you can just leave it at "I love you" I think that sounds alittle better. ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: An Ode to My Fabulous Mother
My eyes started tearing up when reading this. There is so much emotion in this poem, such heart wrenching visualzation. When you said "Ice kisses and hugs that lack emotion" ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: How to Dance Freely in Your Underwear (1)
OMG, I hate myself, I wrote you this HUUUGE review and then my computer completely froze! (arg! :smt013 ) On subject :cry: , I love this story! :D And one ...
Jul 25, 2008 -
Re: I hate you with all my hearts
This was really good! My only complaint is the coarse in the wrong place, but I still think the lyrics are amazing and flow really well! I like the fact ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #1
Wow, I like Christy-Ann! The reason is that you completely beat up a cliche which is "the blonde pretty girls are mean", and it is not like that at all, ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: North Country #1
I love the characters so far, and everything seems so realistic, also with the diolouge being fresh. I can almost see this as an independent film of some sort :lol: ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Smile (I Am Leaving)
This is really good! I agree with people that I'm glad this song doesn't potray what most rap songs do nowadays (girls and there asses :lol: ). I think it ...
Jul 21, 2008 -
Re: Mosquito
This is amazing! I really like the perspectives, and it makes me not want to kill another misquito again! I really like the way you expressed the fear in the ...
Jul 20, 2008 -
Re: Prey to be Preyed
:smt041 This was really good! I'm not the one who really loves reading about murder, but you potrayed it in such a beautiful way, i coulden't help but love this ...
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 7
LOLLOLLOLLOL!!! :smt082 This was so funny!! It is so cute too! Is there more then this? I must know! Go fat boy! Go! :smt081 Get the girl! PM when your ...
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: Far Better Than Here
I almost cried when I read this. I know how it feels to have someone you love with such a painful conditon, and I really do hope your neighbor has ...
Jul 17, 2008
