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  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Hey Sally

    I really like your rhyming pattern here. It fits the tone and makes the poem very catchy. One thing: I feel like you may have wanted to say "Jersey Shore" ...

    Jul 24, 2014


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