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It isn't the same Apple, but I will admit that when I "created" it, I couldn't help thinking of THE Apple... which wasn't actually an apple, but whatever... But it's ...

I'm sooooooryyyyy! I did not meant to post this!!!! The fu**ing bug posted it, but it was meant to be a draft. DO NOT CRITIQUE ON IT... God, I hate ...

Guys: Thanks a lot for your critiques. They were saved and I've been correcting the text in my PC. See ya!

Amelia: Thanks for your critique. It's very helpful. I agree in most of what you said... The thing is, let's clear this up: Moanna came first. She was the Princess ...

I don't mean to say I'm from a Spanish-speaking country when I write in Spanish... it's really one of my firsts goes at it... a tip: Don't use so many ...

Kylan, thanks. I PM'd you, okay?

The sun came through the Secretary's office window, and everything under it seemed to glow in the it's dim light. The day was ending. The Secretary's body was half through ...

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The ship sped through the streets of Seine, guided skillfully by Meier, who did not dare to ask why such an active

Kylan... (This is REALLY turning into a personal chat, but who cares, you're the only one who seems to read it anyway). Sorry about the nick thing, mine's not my ...

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Kana immediately reached for her pistol inside the cloak. "Overthrow you, Dane? What do you mean?" "Well, call it

Kylan (BTW way, cool nick, really matches with my story), since you seemed to, despite all the flaws, like the story, I'll keep writing it. Now I've got to comment ...

I'm very sorry to announce this fanfic is going to be put on hold. Indefinitely. I'm very busy with mi novel right now, four chapters away from the end, and ...

So, here I start the Lizbeth part of Patrick's journey through the Covenant world. Hope you like it. -_____________________________________________________________________- Lizbeth, the fairest of the

Don't be sorry, we all have our different ways of writing.. hehe. I'll begin spacing, then, if it makes the text hard to read... Don't forget to check it once ...

Amelia, thanks! Let me clear somethings out... About the spaces: I actually don't like those spaces, I would like to leave a space between the start of the line and ...