Cthulhu

Ok, I can't provide a detailed review of the text at the moment, but I will post a look at each re-write, how they've changed, and the strengths and weaknesses ...

n, it seemed good with the problems being mostly mechanical (relating to the interaction of word, sentences, grammar, Ect.) I try not to do this but I feel I must ...

My first impression is that it lacks a sense of immediate conflict, and that it needs work on grammar/typos. I noticed some wandering, and many places where you've used two ...

A Princess of Mars ~ Edgar Rice Burroughs Robert E Howard's Conan the Barbarian series H.P. Lovecraft's mythos tales (Be warned these are some of the creepiest stories ever written) ...

I don't know if you still want more, but I've got some no one else recommended. A Princess of Mars ~ Edgar Rice Burroughs Robert E Howard's Conan the Barbarian ...

Firstly I have to say that I'm not positive this needs to be rated '18' but I could be wrong. As to the story, it was interesting, most of its ...

I found it to be a very good read, it reminded me more of a practice vinignette than a full story, which is not to say it seemed unfinished but ...