Cspr

First off, love the description. It was done in a very lovely way and each time it was like a picture flash in my head. Using adjective phrases as well ...

Very good short story. I would have loved a bit more . . . hm, description, maybe, but it was good. I liked the sort of vivid violent element and ...

While ZLYF's advice is sound, I really liked this. At first, I was pretty sure I wouldn't. Like, "Another weird humanoid race? On a planet with two moons? Again?" But ...

So! I quite liked this. Really. It was particularly awesome, which is saying something--normally I'm extremely uptight and don't particularly like to read anything. Because I'm weird. But, anyway, I ...

Hey, it's me again. Anyway, I also liked this chapter. While I don't see so much how this relates to the previous, other than more world-building, it works in some ...

So, I didn't really notice anything wrong. Once or twice I had to re-read something because it was a little off-kilter and my tired mind wasn't absorbing it, but I ...

Interesting song. It seems sort of basic, but it has a steady meaning, a sort of--relaxed quality. I rather like it, I suppose, though I'm not the one to ask. ...

Very offbeat (as in off-kilter). I quite like it. It's very beautiful and it paints pictures in my mind, things I can almost touch but just barely. This was a ...

Wow. So, a lot of emotion in one piece. Or, at least, I felt it. I could feel my heart speed up and feel the protag's indecision. I suppose that's ...

So, this was good. The writing style was pretty interesting and unique, even if it felt odd to my brain--I sort of had to keep rereading certain sentences and such. ...

Good story. There's plenty of emotion in this piece and, as the person above said, you can certainly feel the character, you feel like you get to know them in ...

So . . . I have nothing to say except this was wonderful. There isn't much rhyme whatsoever or any particular set as far as I can tell. There's a ...

Wow. So, I quite like this. I was expecting something totally different going by the title, but--no, this is good. Unexpected. (Even if I was expecting something to make me ...

Hey. So, Cspr here and I'll be your reviewer today. While I haven't read the rest of this book--and I definitely will have to now--what I've seen so far is ...

So, the idea definitely has me intrigued. I have a vague idea of where things are headed from here (of course, as I'm a fanfiction-ite my ideas may be a ...