Crysi

*looks* Where did I forget to close my quotation marks? I see a spot where I accidentally inserted some.. *shrugs* Glad you like it, anyway!

I think it kinda works, because it's a general complaint.

I love it. Excellent poem, love. Hang in there. :)

Ooh.. I like this. There's such energy in it. Desparation. I like it. A lot. Great job! :)

Excellent. Excellent excellent excellent. I love it. It sounds like the narrator is feeling somewhat hopeless, and kind of thinking, "What am I doing here?" Wishing he could escape. *shrugs* ...

Hehe thanks! LOL I just saw your signature!! I'm honored! :D Reminds me, I gotta give you your first lesson.. :wink: Anyway, Crysi is somewhere around your age, actually. I ...

I couldn't help but think of fencing when I read through this. Very nice effect!

First of all, thanks Nai! :) Glad you liked it!! Ok. Perra. *bows down* THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!! I needed all of those comments! I love the idea ...

:D:D:D Thank you so much, Nai! That really means a lot to me. It's funny, I never really thought about the dialogue. It comes so naturally to me. I will ...

Thanks! I'll have to think about some of those things.. only because some details are necessary hints. As for the dead language.. It's fairly recognizable, since the characters are completely ...

I will, I will! When I get around to finishing my hw lol!

Thank you very much!! :D I'm always convinced I've done a horrible job, especially with the second chapter.. So it's very inspiring when I get encouraging comments like these! I ...

I love this! Excellent writing.. and I agree, the second one makes a little more sense. But the original is amazing! :D

My friend is letting me borrow The DaVinci Code.. it's pretty good so far. If I like it, I'll read Angels and Demons next.

I'm sure you'll do great in the contest. ;D