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Re: Rain
Many apologies about the tiny font, and no, I don't know why it's like that.
Aug 30, 2012 -
Re: Tall, Dark and Slender
I accept your wisdom on both points.
Aug 30, 2012 -
Re: Nightfall~ Prologue
I meant complex punctuation. It seems in this instance hypocrisy has got the better of me...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: .
LHeart, you could not be more wrong about DNX's review. Anything which points out the mistakes you made so you can better yourself as a writer is thousands of times ...
Jun 2, 2012 -
Re: Elven Sword Fight
Whoa, that was a good one. I haven't reviewed for ages, but I'm glad I picked this one to start again. I'm going to do all the nitpicks first, simply ...
Apr 6, 2012 -
Re: Beta 158: Chapter 3
Hate to be petty, but I thought it was pretty obvious what happened to the townsfolk. There is a GIANT MOUND OF CORPSES after all.... o_O
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Beta-158: Chapter 2
I think it was "...if I chase you with a cattle prod" .
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: Corpse Pile
In answer to your question Pink, yes this is part of a larger story. I would like to put the next few chapters on to YWS, but I am just ...
Oct 6, 2011
