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Re: Deleted 40
Hi, -Crosa here for review: This is a wonderful piece of writing. I enjoyed reading it multiple times. You have created a real essence of emotion and thought throughout. I ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: Embrace of Darkness
Hi there, Crosa here for review: This is a really engaging piece and sad to read. The use of one liners towards the end are excellent. I think that structure ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Of Dante and Silken Fire
Hi Crosa here for review: To start with great piece, the depth of emotion that is consistently portrayed to the reader is astounding. Your ability in addition to that to ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: Dandelions and Aimless Wings
Hi, Crosa here for a review; The imagery is fantastic and you really create a relationship with the darker side of the reader. Relating to them with lines like: "Not ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: To Make a Violinist Sing (Full Short Story)
Hi, This is a great story and well written. The plot is something to be proud of. You execute it brilliantly. There is no rushing at any point, each turn ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Little Paws
Hi, Just saw your short story and also liked the title so thought I would give it a read. Its interesting to read what essentially is quite a scary or ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: My Untold Story
Hi, So I’m pretty new to this but here goes a review, The descriptions used through out your piece make it beautiful to read. There are lines I think any ...
May 5, 2014