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  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Farenheit 451

    I've been meaning to read this book for a long time. I always get sidetracked. :( Should I make room to read it? :? Absolutely, especially since its plot pertains ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: V For Vendetta

    Yeah, anyone interested in graphic novels should probably read V for Vendetta. It's not perfect, but the core idea is just so enticing its totally worth it. You can't be ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: (E&iC) Dictionary [Part One]

    Devil's advocate time! So before I start, just remember that I'm only reviewing this because it shows great potential, you are remarkably undull, and your writing is the only type ...

    Feb 3, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: (E&iC) Could it be more ridiculous?

    That was funny. Funny in a way where I didn't laugh, but if someone asked me (like you) if it was funny I would have paused in reflection for a ...

    Jan 26, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Prologue with nothing to follow

    Finally, a good prologue, I suppose, and nothing to follow? The universe teases me. It has a sort of stigma: you are constantly tugged forward to this seeming huge secret ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Redwall by Brian Jacques

    I read a lot of those books when I was younger. It seems a little weird for you to be reading them in class, though. I guess they are sort ...

    Jan 4, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Short Story

    Hm... interesting, interesting. I'm confused, but interested. But first off, there are a few grammatical problems in this. First of all, whenever you have dialogue by a different person, you ...

    Dec 30, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The last act of the Black Widow.

    I hope I'm not as crazy as the MC when I write a novel. I mean, in a matter of seconds, she convinces herself of a lot, does she not? ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Sommers' Crash

    I like this world. You do mean the soda coke... never mind. First of all, we have a little policy on this site that you should try to do 2-3 ...

    Dec 10, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The First Canto (tentative title)

    Have you read the Divine Comedy? I have a strong feeling you've read the divine comedy. A very strong feeling. Because, basically, this is the Divine Comedy. It has cantos. ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Black Book

    'Brevity is the soul of wit,' eh? I think you are definitely channeling this. I'm not the best poet here (I despise poetry with a burning passion most days), but ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Teddy bear in Ground Zero-edited version

    Okay, here we go. First off, you have a lot of problems with grammar and vocabulary, which can make this story somewhat hard to comprehend at times. But overall, this ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Secret Chapel (Short Story)

    Ooh, competition. Better make this good. First off, your link to the picture is broken. It's definitely a difficult picture, but you've done well. The concept is sound- Wedding day ...

    Dec 5, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Has anyone read 'The Book Thief' by : Markus Zusak?

    It's an excellent, excellent book. Too long, and with a despicable ending, and very monotonous at times... but totally worth it. Zusak's other [known] book, I Am The Messenger, is ...

    Nov 30, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mrs. Marx surrenders- soul piece

    Overall, I agree- good description. I might argue whether some of it actually means anything. Some lines sound, like Rena said, hard to grasp in a way that doesn't signify ...

    Nov 29, 2009


Sometimes poetry is inspired by the conversation entered into by reading other poems.
— John Barton